Hello! I adore your game, it was so wonderfully drawn/designed and the humour is such a delight! I can't wait to see more from this game and to play the second chapter soon. Till then, I made a let's play of your game here~
Hi! We both watched your video and loved the playthrough very much. You were really funny and gave us many laughs!! ^^ Thanks for playing our currently in-progress game and we can't wait for the second part of your playthrough too!
The game is amazing! I liked the story very much and time flew away so quickly, I coulnd't believe it ended so soon. All of that being said, I do have some feedback for you wonderful people ^ ^
> First of all, the drawings are beautiful! However, the chapter selection screen didn't seem to fit in with the game's drawing style as well as it could have. The drawings are great, but they're layed out a bit too crisp compared to the happy and bubbly vibe of the game. You could try laying them out in some hand-drawn, portrait oriented boxes, flipping through them from left to right, rather than top - bottom;
> THE BLOBBS ARE ADORABLE! If I were a Mercurian, I'd adopt one for sure;
> Since there is no dialogue box displayed while making a decision, placing the choices at the top of the screen is a bit distracting... adding them in the place of the dialogue box would make for a more coherent look, I'd say. Also the blue that appears when you hover over a button is a bit too intense if you ask me, and a soft pink would fit better, but then again, that might just be a personal preference of mine;
> The story didn't seem lacking, and it was really enjoyable, even without a billion choices to make, great job on that! ^ ^
> I did find some weird sentences in the dialogue from "The Funk" :
- "Do you even have someone important" sounds a bit odd and unnatural, maybe try something like " Do you have anyone dear to you " / "Is there anyone you care much about"
- "I'm most close with" is a bit off, gramaticlly speaking; try "I'm closest to" instead
> The game was super fun, the special tab was just the right addition, props for that!
All in all, it was a great experience and I can't wait for the game to go out of the WIP Stage and into the wild! One more thing, is there any place with the developer's social media and such? I'd love to follow you guys <3
Hi! We're going to reply to your points one by one:
< Thanks for the great suggestion! We'll try harder for the GUI!! haha
< blobblob bob
< Oh we didn't realise that! We'll definitely take them into consideration!
< (from the writer/programmer: \^0^/ )
< Thanks for pointing that out!! We really appreciate it <3
< hehe!
We decided to join NaNoReNo to make use of our school break so we hope you won't mind waiting until we find time to work on it again till completion (even if that takes super long ;;)! As for social media, we only have our Tumblr for now but you can find the artist at https://www.instagram.com/koolydragon/ . Thank you for playing and filling in the google survey! Have a nice day ( ＾∇＾)ノ☆
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Cute! I hope Chapter 2 comes out one day. If not, it was still lovely to have Chapter 1. Thanks for sharing <3
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Hello! I adore your game, it was so wonderfully drawn/designed and the humour is such a delight! I can't wait to see more from this game and to play the second chapter soon. Till then, I made a let's play of your game here~
Hi! We both watched your video and loved the playthrough very much. You were really funny and gave us many laughs!! ^^ Thanks for playing our currently in-progress game and we can't wait for the second part of your playthrough too!
I'm super glad you enjoyed it and could actually laugh at my silliness :D
Can't wait for chapter two to come out so good luck to you on it <3
The game is amazing! I liked the story very much and time flew away so quickly, I coulnd't believe it ended so soon. All of that being said, I do have some feedback for you wonderful people ^ ^
> First of all, the drawings are beautiful! However, the chapter selection screen didn't seem to fit in with the game's drawing style as well as it could have. The drawings are great, but they're layed out a bit too crisp compared to the happy and bubbly vibe of the game. You could try laying them out in some hand-drawn, portrait oriented boxes, flipping through them from left to right, rather than top - bottom;
> THE BLOBBS ARE ADORABLE! If I were a Mercurian, I'd adopt one for sure;
> Since there is no dialogue box displayed while making a decision, placing the choices at the top of the screen is a bit distracting... adding them in the place of the dialogue box would make for a more coherent look, I'd say. Also the blue that appears when you hover over a button is a bit too intense if you ask me, and a soft pink would fit better, but then again, that might just be a personal preference of mine;
> The story didn't seem lacking, and it was really enjoyable, even without a billion choices to make, great job on that! ^ ^
> I did find some weird sentences in the dialogue from "The Funk" :
- "Do you even have someone important" sounds a bit odd and unnatural, maybe try something like " Do you have anyone dear to you " / "Is there anyone you care much about"
- "I'm most close with" is a bit off, gramaticlly speaking; try "I'm closest to" instead
> The game was super fun, the special tab was just the right addition, props for that!
All in all, it was a great experience and I can't wait for the game to go out of the WIP Stage and into the wild! One more thing, is there any place with the developer's social media and such? I'd love to follow you guys <3
Hi! We're going to reply to your points one by one:
< Thanks for the great suggestion! We'll try harder for the GUI!! haha
< blobblob bob
< Oh we didn't realise that! We'll definitely take them into consideration!
< (from the writer/programmer: \^0^/ )
< Thanks for pointing that out!! We really appreciate it <3
< hehe!
We decided to join NaNoReNo to make use of our school break so we hope you won't mind waiting until we find time to work on it again till completion (even if that takes super long ;;)! As for social media, we only have our Tumblr for now but you can find the artist at https://www.instagram.com/koolydragon/ . Thank you for playing and filling in the google survey! Have a nice day ( ＾∇＾)ノ☆
I'll gladly wait however long for the rest of the story haha ^ ^
CometFall team, you just got a new follower <3